Araminta Matthews presents a good example in her article "What are weasel words?" Matthews describes an article about a elementary school professor convicted of sexual assault on several of his students.
"The very first article read something to this effect: 'The jury apparently believed the testimony of the three girls from [school district] today...' I forget exactly how the phrasing went, but I distinctly remember the first part of the sentence, 'the jury apparently believed.' Consider the tone of this sentence with specific regard to the use of the word 'apparently.' What opinion do you suppose the author of this story has of the conviction of this music teacher?"In this context "apparently" is a weasel word because it has no basis in fact. It is used to devalue the girl's testimony and the jury's decision.
When writing or editing articles, it is important to watch for weasel words. Not only do they reflected poorly on the writer, but on the entire newspaper and staff. For more examples of weasel words, check out www.weaselwords.com.au
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